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Tuesday, August 7, 2007

Storyboard Notes:

well due to the fact that the story needed some tweaking to be stronger visually Ive had to change a few things and here is a short list of the changes.


Intro:
reworked so that the main theme is now the floating treasuremap, instead of a shot of the ship.
- Mat Caithness gave me a good idea that Im going to have a think on, he said that instead of the scene turning to night I could instead just switch straight to the ships main enterance and have the movie title on the ship like a ship name - the only problem Ive got with this is that it detracts from the captains entrance because it will cause his entrance to be slow...

hmmm
i suppose if I change the entrance a little it may work.

Scene1
Re did the captains entrance and the link between the intro and scene 1

Scene2
changed the birds eye view to a front shot of the deck showing the small minion bears.
added a bit with feet running to show the crew setting about thier tasks

Scene 3
added a shot where the captain strikes a pose and encourages the crew by waving his sword, also used this to show the targeted ship.
changed the ramming scene to a birds eye view as the ships close then as they slide along oneanother to a stop.
changed the crew boarding scene to one with the captain in the lead followed by his howling minions.

Scene4
changed shot of the crew fleeing to a single high angle shot with the captain in the forground as the crew leaves and he turns around.

-everything else is same as before at the moment, i will update the script at some point

1 comments:

annie_mation said...

ben
your water, the high seas one looks great.

The shot of the ship next to ship risks being cluttered with all the action and characters in there